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Remove one AND from Details intro to stop a run-on sentence.#286

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Remove one AND from Details intro to stop a run-on sentence.#286
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"To inspect" sounded clinical and went with the simpler "see" as the action is the same.

Read like a volley of "and" hitting the waves, a summer of sand asking
for just one more. But perhaps in a spell we can rest and start up anew.

"To inspect" sounded clinical.
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Thanks! 👍

jordanmccullough pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Dec 22, 2014
Remove one AND from Details intro to stop a run-on sentence.
@jordanmccullough jordanmccullough merged commit a609ab5 into github:master Dec 22, 2014
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